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高三写作提升11.身份名词1.Heisgoodatlistening.Heisagoodlistener.2.Heisdifficulttogetalongwith;Idon’tthinkhe’llsatisfyourdemands.Heisatoughnut;Idon’tthinkhe’llsatisfyourdemands.类似的身份性表达还有很多，比如说workaholic(apersonwhoworksobsessivelyandfindsitdifficulttostop,shopaholic(apersonwholovestogoshoppingandbuyslotsofthingstheymaynotneed,couchpotato(apersonwhospendsalotoftimesittingandwatchingtelevision.如果用括号里面的解释性句子去描写，可能就会破坏语篇的美感。当然，这样的表达需要平时的积累，大家可以在阅读过程中多做摘记，积累下来，以备不时之需。2.抽象名词的使用1.Thenewsthathehadwonthefirstprizefilledhimwithgreatexcitement.2.Alackofexperienceputshimatadisadvantagecomparedtootheremployees.3.Carefulcomparisonoftwowaysoflifewillshowthesuperiorityoftheformeroverthelatter.可以看出，改写之后的句子之间的语意关系更加紧密，语意也愈加明确了。这样的写作手法在表达复杂句意的时候会显得尤为重要和实用。3.物称主语的使用1.Heissoobservantthatnothingescapeshisattention.2.Herbeautyisbeyonddescription.3.Atwo-hourdrivetookustotheGrandCanyon.4.Itsuddenlyoccurredto/struck/hithimthathehadlefthiswallethome.5.Thevaluablelessonmygrandmataughtmewillberootedinmymemoryforever.有没有觉得改写之后的句子形式更多样，所用的词汇也更加丰富，而且描绘的句意拥有了更强画面感？这就是物称作主语的魅力，它可以让你不再局限于一小部分高频的动词(remember/forget/like/notice/describeetc.，而是可以有更多的发挥空间！4.分词作形容词1.Anincreasingnumberofpatientsinhospitalswillcauseproblemstomedicalcaresystem.2.Undermountingpressure,hewantedtoresign.3.Thehorse-drawnwagonlostitsbalanceandfelloffthecliff.4.Hefrozeonthespot,wide-eyedatthehorriblescene.改写后的句子更加精炼，但是意义上却更加生动，更具画面感，increasing和mounting虽然是形容词，但是却有动态之感。horse-drawn替代了不必要的定语从句。第四句原先的句子并未表现出他当时的震惊之感，而改写后的句子语言简练，语意关系更加紧密，也更加能表现出当时的紧迫感。horse-drawn与wide-eyed
都是通过特定的构词法变化而来的，因此，平时也要注意积累学习构词法的构词规则。5.实义动态动词的使用1.Mutualrespectmaintainsfriendship2.MymotheralwaysurgesmetodohomeworkwhenIarrivehome.3.Thedevelopmentoftechnologyfacilitatesourlife.4.Theletterfromhisparentsarousedhishomesickness.改写后的句子意义上却更加具体，更加生动。因此，在写作中我们应该运用意义更加具体、丰富的动词，适当减少be动词以及使役动词的使用频率。6.介词的使用1.Withstudentsstrugglingwithclassesandcopingwithpressurefromtesting,thereisnotmuchroomforrecreation.(with表示伴随状态；from表示来源；for表示对象2.Wechasehappinessandequalitwithwealthandsuccess,withoutnoticingthatthepeoplehavingthosethingsarenotnecessarilyhappier.3.Theprotectionofwildlifeandthecreationofnationalparksgohandinhandwithtouristdevelopment.改写后的句子用介词衔接名词，语义更加直接明了，更具可读性。7.连词的使用1.Ifwintercomes,canspringbefarbehind?2.Allthingsaredifficultbeforetheyareeasy.3.Ican’tplacemytrustinhim,becauseheisdishonest.4.Workhard,andyouwillsucceedintime.8.从句的使用1.Beijing,whichisthecapitalofChina,attractsmillionsoftouristseveryyear.2.Darcy,whoisinpossessionofagoodfortune,isinwantofabeautifulwifenow.3.ThereusedtobeatimewhenIkeptdoubtingandquestioningmypurposeinlife.4.Weoftentakeforgrantedtheverythingsthatmostdeserveourgratitude.5.TolearnEnglishwell,youshouldputyourselfinsituationswhereyou’llbeforcedtocommunicateinEnglish.原本汉语中的两个分句用从句衔接之后句意更加紧凑，也更有层次性，读起来也更加简练。因此，在英语学习中要培养从句意识，学会正确使用各类从句。9.with复合结构的使用1.Shesaidgood-byewithtearsinhereyes.2.Alltheafternoonheworkedwiththedoorlocked.3.Ican’tgooutwithalltheseclothestowash.4.Don’tspeakwithyourmouthfull.5.Hewaslyingonthebedwithallhisclotheson.高三写作提升21.选择关系Youcangotothemuseumonfootorbybike.Youcaneitherwalkorcycletothemuseum.Hepreferredtowalktothemuseumratherthandrivethere.Hewouldratherwalktothemuseumthandrivethere.Insteadofdrivingtothemuseum,hechosetowalkthere.2.并列关系1.并列之肯定(不同个体

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