如何更好地利用课余时间？

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如何更好地利用课余时间？
作者：黄浩
来源：《初中生·爱英语》2019年第04期
减负之后，中学生有了更多的课余时间，是选择暂时放下繁重的课业，去户外享受美好青春时光，还是读一本书、看一场电影？如何让课余时间更有意义？听听孩子们怎么说。习作开头如下：“Nowadays，westudentshavemuchmorefreetimethaneverbefore.”胡林豪九年级
最喜欢的英语格言：Thegoodseamanisknowninbadweather.惊涛骇浪，方显英雄本色。习作：
Nowadays，westudentshavemuchmorefreetimethaneverbefore.Butquiteanumberofstudentsinourschooldon’tknowhowtomakegooduseoftheirsparetime.Someofthemplaycomputergames，somewatchTVandsomechatwithothers.
Ithinktheseactivitiesaremeaningless.Wecanmakebetteruseofoursparetimebydoingthefollowing：
First，wecandomoresportstomakeusstrongerandhealthier.Second，joininginsocialactivitiesisagoodwaytoknowtheworldoutsideourcampus.Third，readmorebooks.Booksareourfriends.Atlast，trytodosomehousework.Doingsomehouseworkwillmakeyouloveyourparentsmore.
Inaword，don’twasteyourtimeanymore.點评：
作者先用“Some...，some...andsome...”列举同学们的行为，然后阐明自己的观点，用“First...Second...Third...Atlast...”给出建议，用法准确、思路清晰。沈沁怡九年级
最喜欢的英语格言：Thesecretofsuccessistokeepyourgoalsandbeliefs.成功的秘诀在于坚持自己的目标和信念。习作：

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Nowadays，westudentshavemorefreetimethaneverbefore.Butquiteanumberofstudentsinourschooldon’tmakegooduseofit.SomestudentsoftenwatchTV，somestudentsplaycomputergamesseveralhoursaday，andotherstudentschatwiththeirfriendsintheirsparetime.
Idon’tthinkthesearegoodpractices.Somestudentsinourschoolagreewithme.Therearemanyinterestingthingswecando.Wecantakepartinsomesocialactivitiestohelpothers.Wecandosportstokeephealthyanddohouseworktohelpourparents.Ifyoufeeltired，italsoshouldbeagoodideatoreadmorebooksbecausebydoingsowe’llenrichourknowledge.Whatdoyouthinkaboutit？Ifyouagreewithme，let’sdoittogether.点评：
作者以“Idon’tthink...”过渡，观点鲜明。在提出建议时，用到了“itisagoodideatodosth.”这一句型。倪福雪？九年级
最喜欢的英语格言：Opportunityisalwaysreadyforthepeopletoget.机遇永远属于准备好的人。习作：
Nowadays，westudentshavemuchmorefreetimethaneverbefore.Butmanystudentsinourschooldon’tmakegooduseoftheirsparetime.TheyspendtoomuchtimeinwatchingTV，playingcomputergames，chattingwithothersontheircomputer，andsoon.
Inmyopinion，bothplayingcomputergamesandchattingwithothersoncomputerareboring.Ithinkitisimportanttomakebetteruseofoursparetime.Wecantakepartininterestgroupsorreadmorebooks.Ifyouarekind，youcantakepartinsocialactivitiestohelpothers.Doingsportstokeephealthyisalsoagoodidea.Andifyouareathome，remembertodosomehouseworktohelpyourparents.
Ifyoudoso，youwillfeelhappierthanbefore.点评：
作者用到了“sb.spendsometimeindoingsth.”的句式结构，简洁明了。给建议，用到了“itisimportanttodosth.”句型。徐梦茹九年级

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最喜欢的英语格言：Nevergiveupistheonlysecretofyourdream.永不放弃是你梦想实现的唯一秘诀。习作：
Nowadays，westudentshavemuchmorefreetimethaneverbefore.Butquiteanumberofstudentsinourschoolspendtoomuchtimeoncomputergames，andsomearebusywatchingTVorchattingwithothers.Ifeelworriedabouttheseproblems.Thesethingscandistractstudents’attentionfromtheirstudies.Therefore，Isuggestthatstudentsshouldmakebetteruseoftheirsparetime.Mysuggestionsareasfollows：
Wecantakepartinaninterestgroupinwhichwecanlearnwhatwelike.Whenweareat
home，wecanhelpourparentstodosomehousework.Letthemknowwelovethem.Booksareourgoodfriends.Itwillbehelpfultoustoreadsomebooks.
Don’twasteyourtimeanymore.Let’sdosomethingmeaningful.点评：
该文用到了“sb.spendsometimeonsth.”及“sb.bebusydoingsth.”的句式结构，therefore一词起到了承上启下的作用。


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